tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9128337205144111110.post444245491744807274..comments2023-06-22T07:49:35.377-07:00Comments on I'm telling you stories. Trust me.: #FridayFlash 56 - HomeLauren Cude Horsfallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15713938333921978342noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9128337205144111110.post-5426414641730795702011-07-15T23:09:54.162-07:002011-07-15T23:09:54.162-07:00This is lovely, I love at the angst at the beginni...This is lovely, I love at the angst at the beginning and the complete love for the horse - you have summed up how teens feel really well. In answer to your question, it works well for me :o)Rebecca Eminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01931904595437049369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9128337205144111110.post-54664560151201500562011-06-26T05:50:10.217-07:002011-06-26T05:50:10.217-07:00Aww, really enjoyed this slice of life. The pony&#...Aww, really enjoyed this slice of life. The pony's character was awesome, with the cheeky bolting at the squirrel :-)mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9128337205144111110.post-22155683457494705242011-06-25T20:04:51.185-07:002011-06-25T20:04:51.185-07:00Thanks all!
AJ - I worried about that a bit, but ...Thanks all!<br /><br />AJ - I worried about that a bit, but I figured it'd make enough sense in context to leave it. And no teenage kid is going to stop to explain every word :)<br /><br />Lara - I like the thought of her being grounded from the horse too, but I saw her needing to go to him for relief rather than rebellion...<br /><br />Tim - hahaha very close. This horse is a compilation of several horses I've known who've had the privilege of being loved so completely by a young girl. And have done their rider the honour of returning the same.Lauren Cude Horsfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15713938333921978342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9128337205144111110.post-22799055722016579732011-06-25T18:56:37.225-07:002011-06-25T18:56:37.225-07:00Nice little slice of life. The people in this may ...Nice little slice of life. The people in this may be fictional, but I bet the horse is real. ;)Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9128337205144111110.post-58213173067770742202011-06-25T10:50:24.649-07:002011-06-25T10:50:24.649-07:00The mood was set well with Alana's thoughts. Y...The mood was set well with Alana's thoughts. You could sense the angst and anger. Was she grounded from her horse as well? and breaking the rules?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9128337205144111110.post-15075859704844706412011-06-25T06:26:58.290-07:002011-06-25T06:26:58.290-07:00Very enjoyable read. I like that you used terms a...Very enjoyable read. I like that you used terms about the horses, grooming, running and so forth without fear the readers wouldn't know what you were talking about.<br /><br />The ending was a nice wrap up as well. Good story.<br /><br />AJAJ Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17606196822389593939noreply@blogger.com